Listen to the Snow Glisten

May 31, 2010
Just listen,
Listen to the snow glisten.
Over the soft rolling plain,
I hear the snow calling my name.

A gentle breeze brushes across my face,
The snow is fragile as velvet or lace.
Ode to the beauty of the snow,
Ode to how the snow will glow, will flow.

Over the soft rolling plain,
I hear the snow calling my name.
And I listen,
Listen to the snow glisten.

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ellyn-bo-bellyn_2014 said...
Oct. 6, 2010 at 3:13 pm
Really? This was your first? It's so great!!!! I really like the way it just glides as you read it. Its so amazing! I love it!
alanacarlene replied...
Oct. 6, 2010 at 3:36 pm
Really? Ya think so?! Well THANKS! I was actually kinda proud of it after I finished it heh heh :) thank you!
GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 30, 2010 at 8:52 pm
This flows beautifully. It is so smooth and innocent. Great job! :)
alanacarlene replied...
Oct. 1, 2010 at 4:24 pm
Aw yay! Thanks!!!
hepburn said...
Jul. 19, 2010 at 11:05 pm
i love the phrase "listen to the snow glisten" and the way you've elaborated it in this poem :) love it!
alanacarlene replied...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 12:18 am
O wow! Thanks I'm glad you liked it that means a lot to me! This was the first poem I wrote and it's my favorite poem I've written! :)
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