Thirteen-Year-Old To The World

June 22, 2010
My life's a wobbly roller coaster.
There's the twists and turns,
the ups and downs,
and always the anticipation
of the next plummet.
It may seem
like we're having the most fun,
but it's harder than it looks.
Every loss, every painful reminder,
is like taking away a piece
of my already-unstable ride.
A whisper of wind,
a purposeful shove,
and everything
will come crashing down.

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TheUnheardVoice said...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 1:11 am

i really liked this a lot, i think you used really good word choice :)


and i hope you can take a look at some of my writings and give me your opinion because i'm going to read yours :)

Babylufin replied...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 2:42 pm

Aaawesome!! I loved it!

Please take a look at some of my work, if you have time! :)

Babylufin replied...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 2:43 pm
Oops, I didn't mean to make that a reply. =/
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