Thirteen-Year-Old To The World

June 22, 2010
By BaileyBaby13 BRONZE, Enumclaw, Washington
BaileyBaby13 BRONZE, Enumclaw, Washington
2 articles 4 photos 75 comments

My life's a wobbly roller coaster.
There's the twists and turns,
the ups and downs,
and always the anticipation
of the next plummet.
It may seem
like we're having the most fun,
but it's harder than it looks.
Every loss, every painful reminder,
is like taking away a piece
of my already-unstable ride.
A whisper of wind,
a purposeful shove,
and everything
will come crashing down.


The author's comments:
Thank you Mrs. Demerjian, my seventh grade English teacher, for assigning this,(:

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Babylufin GOLD said...
on Aug. 18 2010 at 2:43 pm
Babylufin GOLD, Liberal, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"'For I know the plans I have for you', declares the Lord, 'plans to prosper you and not harm you, plans to give you hope and a future.'" Jeremiah 29:11. Thank you Lord, for this future you've given me.

Oops, I didn't mean to make that a reply. =/

Babylufin GOLD said...
on Aug. 18 2010 at 2:42 pm
Babylufin GOLD, Liberal, Missouri
13 articles 2 photos 230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"'For I know the plans I have for you', declares the Lord, 'plans to prosper you and not harm you, plans to give you hope and a future.'" Jeremiah 29:11. Thank you Lord, for this future you've given me.

Aaawesome!! I loved it!

Please take a look at some of my work, if you have time! :)


on Aug. 18 2010 at 1:11 am
ElenaSnapz PLATINUM, Western Springs, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Writing is a passion from within, you can write about anything that your heart desires and nobody can tell you that it is wrong.

Loving somebody is like giving them a gun and hoping they don't pull the trigger

i really liked this a lot, i think you used really good word choice :)

 

and i hope you can take a look at some of my writings and give me your opinion because i'm going to read yours :)



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