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Where blue ribbon ripples over the pure grains
Where footprints, abandoned by strangers, coat the yellow sand
Where moss covers the mountains like veins
Where planets and moons can be grand

Where mixtures of red and yellow color the sky
Where the stars shine bright at the same time
Where the horizon can sigh and
Where a galaxy is at its prime

This is where heaven meets earth



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SpringRayynThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 1, 2011 at 1:21 am
I like the use of repitition that you use here. The rhyming isn't distracting. I hardly even noticed it until I double-checked that it was there! The ending is interesting and actually I think I like this poem a lot more than I rated it--3--but it's too late to chang it now.
 
SpringRayynThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 1, 2011 at 1:22 am
oh, i meant "Change," not 'chang.'
 
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