Angelic

June 22, 2010
By Kbuschan PLATINUM, South Plainfield, New Jersey
Kbuschan PLATINUM, South Plainfield, New Jersey
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Fall in love or fall in hate; Get inspired or be depressed; Ace a test or flunk a class; Make babies or make art; Speak the truth or lie and cheat; Dance on tables or sit in the corner; Life is divine chaos. Embrace it. Breathe. And enjoy the ride...


Where blue ribbon ripples over the pure grains
Where footprints, abandoned by strangers, coat the yellow sand
Where moss covers the mountains like veins
Where planets and moons can be grand

Where mixtures of red and yellow color the sky
Where the stars shine bright at the same time
Where the horizon can sigh and
Where a galaxy is at its prime

This is where heaven meets earth



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on Jan. 1 2011 at 1:22 am
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
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"Don't punish yourself," she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing."
--Markus Zusak, "The Book Thief"

oh, i meant "Change," not 'chang.'

on Jan. 1 2011 at 1:21 am
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
34 articles 2 photos 658 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't punish yourself," she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing."
--Markus Zusak, "The Book Thief"

I like the use of repitition that you use here. The rhyming isn't distracting. I hardly even noticed it until I double-checked that it was there! The ending is interesting and actually I think I like this poem a lot more than I rated it--3--but it's too late to chang it now.


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