Mood Rings and White Roses

Without a doubt the saddest thing I’ve seen in a long time
Are the people who walk down the street
Where has the brilliance gone?
Is it locked in the asylums and in the hospitals?
For I can’t seem to find a certain someone anymore
They’re all gone
The moon shine, the psychopaths
It’s all been overcome by the sun
The darkness is not as dark as it once was
And the light is a dull, motel room lamp
For without the brilliance
Without the madness
This world is a canvas
With no artist.





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AshTree said...
Nov. 14, 2010 at 12:14 pm
I love this! last four lines are my favorite. Keep writing, because this was great!
 
HIPPIEatHEART_writerINsoul This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 28, 2010 at 7:35 pm

I sincerely appreciate it, once again!

:3

 
FlyWithMe_899 said...
Jul. 19, 2010 at 7:39 pm
i enjoyed reading this :) it makes total sense in the end. i liked it, good job!!
 
HIPPIEatHEART_writerINsoul This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 19, 2010 at 9:44 pm

One thousand thank yous!

=D

 
thoughtsofmine said...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 11:54 pm
this is so amazing. you have an extraordinary mind and i enjoyed this greatly. and i'm pretty sure i completely understood what you meant. beautiful. keep writing.
 
HIPPIEatHEART_writerINsoul This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 19, 2010 at 4:49 pm

Thank you so much.

It means a lot to me. :)

 
MelanieLouise This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 11:09 pm

i cannot stop reading this. it is...i can't even think of a good word for it. i totally get what you are saying and i love it.

 

the last four lines are probably my favorite.

 

keep writing

 

Always,

Mel

 
HIPPIEatHEART_writerINsoul This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 11:38 pm

Awww, thanks! =D

I really, really appreciate it.

Thanks again. :)

 
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