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You never showed

the sky was dark,
the moon hidden behind ominous clouds,
the stars had disappeared,
leaving no trace of there existence.

the air was cold,
the grass wet with fresh dew,
the wind was still,
the night was silent,
the night was perfect,
peaceful, quite,lovely,breathtaking
But I was alone,
you were not there,
and even though my heart longed for your arrival,
you never appeared............





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crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 19, 2010 at 5:44 pm
Wow i love this!!! its so deep and emotional!!!  if you could please comment and rate my work that would be great!! especially to anonymous!!!! thanx and ur really good!!!!
 
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