Perfect For Me

July 12, 2010
By MadeleineJoy SILVER, Burlington, Other
MadeleineJoy SILVER, Burlington, Other
5 articles 4 photos 2 comments

My favourite time of year
For many different reasons
The crisp cool days
Make for a lovely way home
Cool edgy wind on my face
Blows the golden tendrils of my hair around
But its already messy from the long school day
My Etnies scuff across the rough pavement
Laughter fills the air
As the wind tells us a story
My friendly companion shares a joke with me
These are the days that should last forever
The crunching of the leaves fills my ears
The sun warms up my wind shattered face
I should feel pain from my purse that seems to hold the world
But all I can think about is bliss
Oh how I love this season
Not too hot and not too cold
Just perfect
Perfect for me.


The author's comments:
I was inspired to write this poem after walking home from school with my best friend. I hoped to paint a picture for the people who read this, almost as if they were standing there right next to me.

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on Jul. 20 2010 at 4:05 pm
MadeleineJoy SILVER, Burlington, Other
5 articles 4 photos 2 comments
Thank you :)

on Jul. 19 2010 at 5:23 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

wow i luv it!!! the description is awesome!!  if you could please comment and rate my work that would be great!! especially to anonymous!!!! thanx and ur really good!!!!

on Jul. 18 2010 at 6:27 pm
MadeleineJoy SILVER, Burlington, Other
5 articles 4 photos 2 comments
Thank you very much :)

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on Jul. 18 2010 at 6:25 pm
PC0916 BRONZE, Neskowin, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"Women are brain ninjas!" -Dane Cook

Good job, I loved it.




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