Steep Hills

July 3, 2010
By bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
29 articles 0 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant


Steep hills
And valleys
With the love and support from all
She will again realize she is loved
And wanted
You may feel your words
Of hope and strength
Are the sounds she isn’t listening to?
But your words will soon
Built up in her head
And conquer evil thought
She will soon blossom,
And live life of
Love
And laughter
Over again.



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on Jul. 23 2010 at 2:19 pm
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
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sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant

yup that is how i feel every single day

on Jul. 23 2010 at 2:19 pm
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
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sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant

i will comment your work huney thankz for comments mine

on Jul. 23 2010 at 2:18 pm
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
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sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant

thankz you so much it means a lot

on Jul. 19 2010 at 5:19 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

wow this is so thoutful and deep i love it!!! if you could please comment and rate my work that would be great!! especially to anonymous!!!! thanx and ur really good!!!!

on Jul. 19 2010 at 8:06 am
wind.and.rain.again BRONZE, Amherst, Massachusetts
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"What is it you wish to do with your one wild and precious life?" Mary Oliver

this so deep. i loved it!

tbaby13 said...
on Jul. 18 2010 at 6:25 pm
tbaby13, Toccoa, Georgia
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"Every one says mistakes, but I say another lesson learned"

i thought that it was really good. Keep up the good work!!

 


on Jul. 18 2010 at 3:12 pm
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
29 articles 0 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant

ya i am the she in this poem

on Jul. 17 2010 at 6:15 pm
distressed_cinderella PLATINUM, San Leandro, California
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" You can't make something stay that wants to go. You can only love what you have while you have it"

Oh, btw spelling error: change built to build

on Jul. 17 2010 at 6:14 pm
distressed_cinderella PLATINUM, San Leandro, California
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" You can't make something stay that wants to go. You can only love what you have while you have it"

In don't know why, but I felt myself catching my breath when I read this. Nice job..may I ask are you the she who will soon blossom?

on Jul. 17 2010 at 3:01 pm
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
29 articles 0 photos 111 comments

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sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant

thank you so much ☺☺☺

Sencere BRONZE said...
on Jul. 17 2010 at 12:55 pm
Sencere BRONZE, Annapolis, Maryland
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Why am I fighting to live, when I'm just living to fight. Why am I trying to see when there ain't nothing in sight. Why am I trying to give when no one gives me a try. Why am I dying to live, when I'm just living to die.

I like it 4 stars


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