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Steep Hills

Steep hills
And valleys
With the love and support from all
She will again realize she is loved
And wanted
You may feel your words
Of hope and strength
Are the sounds she isn’t listening to?
But your words will soon
Built up in her head
And conquer evil thought
She will soon blossom,
And live life of
Love
And laughter
Over again.



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crubs3This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 19, 2010 at 5:19 pm:
wow this is so thoutful and deep i love it!!! if you could please comment and rate my work that would be great!! especially to anonymous!!!! thanx and ur really good!!!!
 
bbygurl21 replied...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 2:19 pm :
i will comment your work huney thankz for comments mine
 
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papaya365 said...
Jul. 19, 2010 at 8:06 am:
this so deep. i loved it!
 
bbygurl21 replied...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 2:19 pm :
yup that is how i feel every single day
 
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tbaby13 said...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 6:25 pm:

i thought that it was really good. Keep up the good work!!

 

 
bbygurl21 replied...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 2:18 pm :
thankz you so much it means a lot
 
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distressed_cinderellaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 17, 2010 at 6:15 pm:
Oh, btw spelling error: change built to build
 
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distressed_cinderellaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 17, 2010 at 6:14 pm:
In don't know why, but I felt myself catching my breath when I read this. Nice job..may I ask are you the she who will soon blossom?
 
bbygurl21 replied...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 3:12 pm :
ya i am the she in this poem
 
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Sencere said...
Jul. 17, 2010 at 12:55 pm:
I like it 4 stars
 
bbygurl21 replied...
Jul. 17, 2010 at 3:01 pm :
thank you so much ☺☺☺
 
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