Lonely Eyes

June 17, 2010
By buckgracerse BRONZE, Lakeland, Florida
buckgracerse BRONZE, Lakeland, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
No women really wants a man to carry her off; She only wants him to want to do it - Elizabeth Peters


Lonely eyes

Sweepacrossmyface


Pain


overwhelming

Chocolate kisses touch the light

disarray of vision

solitude of soul


trying to reach out



but shying away

wandering


inside
speckles of loneliness danc3e through you think lashes

shimmering tears well at the crease



hidden



secret

whites disrupted with the illness


so twisted


scanningtheroom


lookingforthreats

eyes land on me


no


recognition



alone


The author's comments:
The inspiration behind this piece is something very personal to me. I had seen someone I hadn't seen in a while and I noticed something about them. their eyes. They were different, it was hard to pinpoint, but there was this new sense of desperation I had never seen before. I just couldn't shake the despair and loneliness I had felt. Eventually it formed into this.

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on Jul. 15 2010 at 12:13 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

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"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

This is really good!! i can feel the emotion!!! if you could please rate and comment my work that would be great!! thanks and u r really good dont stop!!!




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