The Sun

June 19, 2010
By hazle1eyes SILVER, Greenfield, New Hampshire
hazle1eyes SILVER, Greenfield, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
one look in the mirror can change how you see things and how you live your life


The sun is so bright it light's up the night, big bold and yellow its like a friendly fellow. It shimmers down upon me waiting anxiously, for night to come once again so i can pray for thee. As I sleep at night, I dreem about the sun. Oh how it makes me feel, like i want to have fun. Waking up once again, I ran out fast to see. The sun was out in the sky, staring back at me.

The author's comments:
what inspired me to writ this poem was one night befor I went to sleep after a very long boring day. I was hoping to make up for it with a full day of fun in the sun. Ther hadent been much color to go around. personaly i felt there was a dim indivisible cloud structure stuck over head. so I woke up the next morning to the sun big and bold and yellow. with the satisfaction of a perfict day filled with fun, smiles, and laughter.

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on Jul. 18 2010 at 1:05 am
Short, but bright. So cheerful! :)

on Jul. 15 2010 at 12:08 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

This is really good!! i can feel the emotion!!! its really light and cheerful!!! if you could please rate and comment my work that would be great!! thanks and u r really good dont stop!!!


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