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The sun is so bright it light's up the night, big bold and yellow its like a friendly fellow. It shimmers down upon me waiting anxiously, for night to come once again so i can pray for thee. As I sleep at night, I dreem about the sun. Oh how it makes me feel, like i want to have fun. Waking up once again, I ran out fast to see. The sun was out in the sky, staring back at me.




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Healing_angel said...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 1:05 am:
Short, but bright. So cheerful! :)
 
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crubs3This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 12:08 am:
This is really good!! i can feel the emotion!!! its really light and cheerful!!! if you could please rate and comment my work that would be great!! thanks and u r really good dont stop!!!
 
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