The One Thing You Don't Know

June 19, 2010
By carly... GOLD, Shorewood, Illinois
carly... GOLD, Shorewood, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Just because I'm not happy does not mean I'm depressed


You beg for my forgiveness, though you know you won't get it
You try to act saddened, though you know that I don't buy it
You broke my heart, though you know that I'm hiding it
You see that I act happy, though you know the feelings I'm hiding
You still feel for me, though you know that I don't
You ruined what could be, though you know it would never happen
You saved me some grief, though you know it wasn't much
You should know that I'm over you, though I know that you don't


The author's comments:
I wrote this after listening to Breakeven, by The Script

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carly... GOLD said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 1:06 pm
carly... GOLD, Shorewood, Illinois
13 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just because I'm not happy does not mean I'm depressed

thanks... :)

Mayb92 SILVER said...
on Jul. 18 2010 at 3:28 pm
Mayb92 SILVER, Effingham, South Carolina
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You can't save a damsel in distress if she loves her distress--Gossip Girl

love your poem :) it's really expressive :) you can check a couple of mine if u want

on Jul. 15 2010 at 4:58 pm
DustyCheyanne<3 SILVER, Excelsior Springs, Missouri
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Its going to hurt, before it feels better. Trust me.. Its worth it.

this is so beautiful. I absolutely love it! 5 star for sure (:

please check out/rate some of my work! (:


on Jul. 15 2010 at 12:05 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

This is really good!! i can feel the emotion!!! if you could please rate and comment my work that would be great!! thanks and u r really good dont stop!!! (ps i love that song!!)

on Jul. 14 2010 at 11:17 am
TheSummoningFreak PLATINUM, Lugoff, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
if you can never let yourself fall you'll never know what it's like to love

this was Amazing, I loved it. it was so beautifully written. this was great.


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