A Third Portion of Love

May 24, 2010
By MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.


When I want to hear your voice,
I almost go crazy
when I have no way to hear it;
if I have a message
from you on my phone,
I listen to it
until that want is satisfied.
When I have a craving
to watch you handle life,
i sit back and observe
how you handle things;
watch where you go
and how you get there,
Listen to what you say
and how you say it:
And these are a couple
of love's wishes.
When I need to feel your assurance,
it doesn't go away until I get it;
a wonderful
and always warm embrace,
sweet caring
and words from your mouth.
Every-time I need an opinion
of someone I like,
trust,
and respect,
I always come to you;
ask what you think
of the situation,
take in what you think
is the best thing to do.
And these are some
of love's wishes.
As I need an outlet for emotions,
I run to you as you wish me to do:
I cry it out,
I tell you every random thought.
When either of us
want an escape from reality,
we lose ourselves together;
tell stories of a future,
fantasy life,
get lost in a deep conversation:
And this whole poem,
only makes up a small portion
of the life called love.

The author's comments:
I am trying out a poem series with the same pt but diff words to each poem and a diff meaning in each. The poems in this has "Portion of love" in the title.

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on Jul. 23 2010 at 10:15 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
70 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

Again, thankYou for your feedBack and i am glad you love it :)

on Jul. 13 2010 at 12:10 pm
tianaxbiddy SILVER, Wareham, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Plot is character revealed by action."




-Aristotle

i love this peom. its awsome.


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