the sun and the moon

the sun is a god
the moon is a goddess
the stars are their children
they sacrifice their lives to give us light
the only time they see each other is during eclipses...you are the sun and i am the moon...and this is our...fate...





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Lay16 said...
Nov. 7, 2010 at 5:55 pm
Amazing poem
 
woundedcondor replied...
Nov. 9, 2010 at 8:33 pm
omg thanks u so much
 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 2:33 pm
Very well written! It has a very interesting theme, and I loved reading it. I applaud you for it.
 
condor replied...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 7:09 pm
omg thank u
 
Kingfan123 said...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 10:04 am
Wow! Very good! You have such an interesting way of looking at things! Pat yourself on the back! :-)
 
condor replied...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 12:11 pm
lol thx ;]
 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 13, 2010 at 11:35 pm
when i first started reading this I was like "yeah, whatever", but when i read the last line I was lke" yeah, there goes the monkey." very nice captain.
 
condor replied...
Aug. 15, 2010 at 12:06 am
xxD thanks ;]
 
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