the sun and the moon

June 12, 2010
By woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."


the sun is a god
the moon is a goddess
the stars are their children
they sacrifice their lives to give us light
the only time they see each other is during eclipses...you are the sun and i am the moon...and this is our...fate...


The author's comments:
this poem is dedicated to my friend/s who just graduated.

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on Nov. 9 2010 at 8:33 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

omg thanks u so much

Lay18 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 7 2010 at 5:55 pm
Lay18 PLATINUM, Portsmouth, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Live and Learn

Amazing poem

on Aug. 29 2010 at 7:09 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

omg thank u

on Aug. 29 2010 at 2:33 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

Very well written! It has a very interesting theme, and I loved reading it. I applaud you for it.

on Aug. 29 2010 at 12:11 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

lol thx ;]

on Aug. 29 2010 at 10:04 am
Kingfan123 GOLD, Charles Town, West Virginia
17 articles 6 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life moves pretty fast, if you don't stop to look around once in awhile, you could miss it."
and
"I'd rather stand alone for the right reasons than stand popular for the wrong."

Wow! Very good! You have such an interesting way of looking at things! Pat yourself on the back! :-)

on Aug. 15 2010 at 12:06 am
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

xxD thanks ;]

on Aug. 13 2010 at 11:35 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

when i first started reading this I was like "yeah, whatever", but when i read the last line I was lke" yeah, there goes the monkey." very nice captain.




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