My Eyes

June 12, 2010
By shocking. GOLD, West Bloomfield, Michigan
shocking. GOLD, West Bloomfield, Michigan
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Look into my eyes
Now tell me what you see
Do you see a ghost of hurt?
A tremble of desire?
Or do you see a wounded spirit,
A tragic soul on fire?
Is there any proof at all
That someone inhabits this body?

Do my eyes seem shallow
or deep as the ocean,
and maybe as cold as the sea?
A frigid wonderland for all that wonder
what it's like to be me.



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on Jul. 20 2010 at 12:46 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

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