My Eyes

June 12, 2010
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Look into my eyes
Now tell me what you see
Do you see a ghost of hurt?
A tremble of desire?
Or do you see a wounded spirit,
A tragic soul on fire?
Is there any proof at all
That someone inhabits this body?

Do my eyes seem shallow
or deep as the ocean,
and maybe as cold as the sea?
A frigid wonderland for all that wonder
what it's like to be me.





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crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 12:46 pm
Wow i love ur work!! its so great and gets such a point across!! culd u possibly check out and comment on my work?? thanx and ur really good dont stop!!
 
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