Never Trust?

June 10, 2010
By Kbuschan PLATINUM, South Plainfield, New Jersey
Kbuschan PLATINUM, South Plainfield, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Fall in love or fall in hate; Get inspired or be depressed; Ace a test or flunk a class; Make babies or make art; Speak the truth or lie and cheat; Dance on tables or sit in the corner; Life is divine chaos. Embrace it. Breathe. And enjoy the ride...


Never trust your gut
It makes you sick
Never trust your heart, it judges too quick
Never trust your eyes, they only lie
Never trust your brain, its too preoccupied

What can you trust then?
A breeze that seems to point the way?
Or a sign that you think God sent to you in May?

Truth is
I don't know what you can trust
But let it not be this

Because you heart connects to your soul
Your eyes help it see
For it, your brain is a scroll
And your gut stings you like a bee

But you know you love the feeling
Its the feeling of life.
You'll need some healing
But it'll all turn out alright



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on Jan. 1 2011 at 1:26 am
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't punish yourself," she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing."
--Markus Zusak, "The Book Thief"

(ps: punctuation is pretty much all good...mostly. I'll not be too picky with this one because it's not distracting. good job!)

on Jan. 1 2011 at 1:25 am
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
34 articles 2 photos 659 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't punish yourself," she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing."
--Markus Zusak, "The Book Thief"

Wow. This one is really powerful. "You'll need some healing : But it'll all turn out alright." That was my favorite lines. It kind of seems like to cover all the other things people write poems about mostly, and tells them that you can't really trust what they think they can. This poem I feel I can really connect with.


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