Bone Chilling Death

June 10, 2010
By TheNamesKrista27 SILVER, Cherry Hill, New Jersey
TheNamesKrista27 SILVER, Cherry Hill, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
It is not weak to cry. For if we didn't have strong feelings, how could we love or fight?


You hurt me
I let my guard down and you plowed through
leaving me without confidence
completely vulnerable
you threw me into bone chilling water
abandoning me with blue lips
a broken heart
and a feeling of numb
eating me alive with every word I tried to say
the shock was unbearable
I cried
I cried so hard that I drowned
but as my world went black
and my lungs collapsed
I couldn't help but think
how much I truly loved you



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on Feb. 17 2012 at 9:29 pm
fallingupstairs SILVER, Cherry Hill, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Pray not to outlive memory, but rather for memory to outlive you.

You brought tears to my eyes. Just wow.

on Nov. 4 2010 at 1:49 pm
fallingupstairs SILVER, Cherry Hill, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Pray not to outlive memory, but rather for memory to outlive you.

i really like this one, especially the irony at the end.




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