Bone Chilling Death

June 10, 2010
You hurt me
I let my guard down and you plowed through
leaving me without confidence
completely vulnerable
you threw me into bone chilling water
abandoning me with blue lips
a broken heart
and a feeling of numb
eating me alive with every word I tried to say
the shock was unbearable
I cried
I cried so hard that I drowned
but as my world went black
and my lungs collapsed
I couldn't help but think
how much I truly loved you

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fallingupstairs said...
Feb. 17, 2012 at 9:29 pm
You brought tears to my eyes. Just wow.
freyamarie96 said...
Nov. 4, 2010 at 1:49 pm
i really like this one, especially the irony at the end.
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