My storm of heartbreak

June 14, 2010
By kodyz_angel PLATINUM, Onsted, Michigan
kodyz_angel PLATINUM, Onsted, Michigan
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if happiness seems more like a fantasy than a reality its because the tears are blinding you from the light that is trying to shine through
by:me


I feel the salty rain drops cascade down my cheeks
I watch as gravity drops them onto my hand
That is clutching the warm metal hanging on a fraying string around my neck
My eyes blur trying to hold the rain in
But it fails and the rain drops fall
They slwoly sink into my skin and disappear
All the pain and sorrow being absorbed
I hear the thunder breaking through
My ears cringe at the sound of it
The choked back girlish scream that is accompanied by a sob
Sounds through out the black sky
The heart break rings out through it
Red lightning strikes against the pale white sky on my arm
It strikes again and again
Viciously engraving red into the snow white of the sky
Slowly the anger in the lightning subsides and the thunder is silent
The salty rain drops fall for a little longer
Then my green clouds produce no more
Finally the storm seems to have subsided
But in relaity it is just raging inside me



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on Aug. 5 2010 at 9:08 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

wow this is awesome!! i really really like this it has something speacial to it:) wonderful, fantastilc job!! i really enjoyed reading this, ypur word choic is amazing! please check out some of my work if you get the chance:)




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