the obvious

June 13, 2010
By babigerl1194 PLATINUM, Margaretville, New York
babigerl1194 PLATINUM, Margaretville, New York
23 articles 10 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
wat doesnt kill you only makes you stronger


some things will never change:
the way I write down everything.
how everything is kept for the memory

they way you
look at me.

while others will:
girls will come and go.
boys will come and go.
what we admit to each other.

why do we do this?
sit here and
act.
we’re not actors or actresses just teenagers
yet we pretend we cannot feel the tension.

Tension. tension. tension.
its louder than thunder.
brighter than lightening
everybody can feel it.

compliments.
real feelings hidden under sarcasm.
looks, sharp as needles stabbing at one another,
daring to make a move.


The author's comments:
hmm. not having who you want sux.

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on Aug. 12 2010 at 9:35 am
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, 'I have always thought that but never found the words for it.'" -anonymous

Ok, I really should have said this to this stupid guy that I had a stupid crush on... sorta still have it. But anyways, I can definitely relate to this, so I loved it. But I adored it because your poetry writing and flow is magnificent. Good job. I really liked this.

on Jul. 15 2010 at 12:14 pm
mellowmaria BRONZE, Blackburn, Other
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Favorite Quote:
if you choose a job you love you'll never have to work another day of your life- sounds gd!!

i love this poem, wrtitten really well n everyone can relate to things in it. dramatic at times and really gd!!! xx

on Jul. 13 2010 at 7:39 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
48 articles 0 photos 1754 comments

Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

This is relatable and realistic, very well-put and well-rhythmed.  Nice job.

on Jul. 13 2010 at 6:43 pm
Just.A.Dream SILVER, Lake Geneva, Wisconsin
7 articles 0 photos 431 comments

Favorite Quote:
Part of the J7X team. :)

I can relate to this. Very well written, sad. :( Keep up writing!




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