This Pain is like the Rain

June 7, 2010
By JakeShaw PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
JakeShaw PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
When you're in a night that seems almost devoid of stars and you look but can't find someone to help you see. Look for that lonely star and let it guide you until you find the light. (anonymous)


I've known this pain,
It comes and goes like rain.
Been here before,
and it'll be back for sure.

Now you're really long gone,
And I just cant help but feel so wrong.
Here comes that awful pain,
as it keeps pouring down like rain.

Still see you there,
Just wishing you would still care.
Back here alone,
This dark and empty home.

Now bidding farewell,
As I'm stuck in this living hell.
Nothing is feeling right,
And so we lose the last ray of light.

We were so glad,
That beautiful life we had.
It's been so long,
Now we see that it's all gone.

I see you're back around,
To claim all of your lost and found.
Just wishing you would see,
I still want you back here with me.

It's not hard to see,
You don't wanna talk to me.
I really feel,
I wont be able to heal.

All this pain in me,
just isn't gunna let me free.
Until I can leave here,
To a place I can shed some tears.

When I get there,
These memories we shared.
They'll all stay with me,
Until you finally set me free.


The author's comments:
I think we have all had a time when an ex or friend has hurt/left us. This was written when a really good friend took off, but things got better and she finally set me free.

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on Aug. 10 2010 at 6:33 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna

this piece seems to have the flow of a song... good stuff springs from the bad...

on Jul. 14 2010 at 4:20 pm
A friend who let you free hey?? Well, did you let her free, or do keep letting her back  in?




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