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Love Changes Within A Blink

June 12, 2010
By special1c BRONZE, Attleboro, Massachusetts
special1c BRONZE, Attleboro, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is short, we need time to live."


Our hands laced with the inevitable love,
Looking deep into his brown eyes,
All the world’s imperfection forgotten,
My mistakes that cause my pain gone,
Tears, secrets, winnings and regrets shed within your presence,
Your pearly whites light up from you winning because I can’t stay mad,
Being stuck in this reality, it doesn’t seem so bad,
Our hands intertwined, desire shown,
A vision of true love painted with a brush,
Looking back on all my gains and losses, you were always there,
Now as I look deep within your eyes,
I hear only the roaring rivers,
This picture scars and is burnt onto my heart,
Redemption, repentance, all is forgiven,
My kingdom wasn’t filled with laughter until my eyes met yours,
I wake up in the midst of all this,
I dreamed I was a awake,
I look into the mirror and see the humorless grave stare.



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on Jul. 14 2010 at 6:27 pm
special1c BRONZE, Attleboro, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is short, we need time to live."

awwe thx, i liked writing this piece.

on Jul. 11 2010 at 12:16 pm
girly_25 BRONZE, Fort Myers, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"The true work of art is but a shadow of the divine perfection."








::: Michelangelo
"Love means holding on to someone just as hard as you can because if you don't, one blink and they might disappear forever

i love your poem....its..its AMEZING. it makes me think of my relationship...