are you out there

June 12, 2010
Are you out there?
Were the sun
Always blossoms
Were they say the light never dies
Were the term happiness
Has multiple definitions
Were children’s minds, roam free
Were music
Is a humans lullaby
Were you can always have a dream
Were the creatures
Are loved by one another
Were you can finally say your safe
Were a man
Can determine his steps
Were they know it as, Eternal
Were your hands
Are the purest symphony
Were your feelings soar through the skies
Were a broken heart
Is the most beautiful sadness
Were true joy exists
Were words
Are the only items that replenish
Were friends are always there to be made
Were angels
Float around, yet are too shy to let be seen
Were you discover yourself
Are you out there?
For now,

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DifferentTeen said...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 1:39 pm
I didn't really like it, but thats just my opinion. Everyone else liked it so you must have done a excellent job. I just didn't really understnd it.
DifferentTeen replied...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 1:44 pm
And I'm not really sure but I think you meant to say "where" not "were"
bullet.with.butterfly.wings replied...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 3:56 pm
This poem is actually about me questioning God. I'm asking is he really there, is heaven an actual place, is this world what people describe it as. If you don't like it than fine, that's your opion & i respect it...but at the same time it's my work as in if you don't understand it than great, it did it's purpose.
CloneA This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 4:34 pm
trblue said...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 3:48 pm
hot Zut (darn or dame in french) that was so good.
FlyleafFreak said...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 12:57 pm
This is amazing! I've aksed the same question millions of times and trust me, he's out there. I really hope you continue writing cause this really took my breath away.
babigerl1194 said...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 11:00 am
i LOVE how its not about LOVE but about life and nature and yet is still appealing. to me this is hardest to write and you pulled it off beautifully. plz check my work too though?!
dreamer said...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 10:35 am

This is really beautiful, great imagery!!

Please check out my work. :)

Kiersten said...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 1:20 am
yikes... this made my heart flutter or something... i don't know what was going on... i think it may of actually stopped of something :D this is really good.... i love it... i'm giving this a 5 and tagging it as a favourite!!!
Eilatan This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 11, 2010 at 4:55 pm
this is really cool. and I love your screen name, so i kind of had to comment.
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