The reeper

June 6, 2010
By Kbuschan PLATINUM, South Plainfield, New Jersey
Kbuschan PLATINUM, South Plainfield, New Jersey
25 articles 0 photos 64 comments

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Fall in love or fall in hate; Get inspired or be depressed; Ace a test or flunk a class; Make babies or make art; Speak the truth or lie and cheat; Dance on tables or sit in the corner; Life is divine chaos. Embrace it. Breathe. And enjoy the ride...


Why must you cut me open?/
Does it satisfy you?/
To see my pain/
To feel my feelings/
Well you are out of luck/
I have no pain/
And I have no feelings/
I lost those long ago/
I lost them with my voice/
With my eyes/
With my ears/
And with my soul/
When someone like you stole them from me/
You, the reeper//



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on Jan. 1 2011 at 5:23 pm
Kbuschan PLATINUM, South Plainfield, New Jersey
25 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
Fall in love or fall in hate; Get inspired or be depressed; Ace a test or flunk a class; Make babies or make art; Speak the truth or lie and cheat; Dance on tables or sit in the corner; Life is divine chaos. Embrace it. Breathe. And enjoy the ride...

i didnt even notice the spelling, thanks and yeh rhyming is just so much easier but ill work on my non-rhyming stuff

on Jan. 1 2011 at 1:30 am
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't punish yourself," she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing."
--Markus Zusak, "The Book Thief"

Oh my gosh, this is absolutely amazing. But "reeper" is spelled like 'reaper,' I believe. Anyway, this is really powerful and creepy at the same time. I notice that this is one of the few (that I've read so far) that you haven't rhymed with, and I like it a lot more it seems to me. Remember that rhyming all the time makes people bored and can sometimes be distracting. Besides, when you can make things as amazing as this without rhymes, who needs them? Just kidding, rhymes aren't all bad. C: Why do you have slashes after every line? Is this a song?




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