Things have feelings too

June 6, 2010
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You use me everyday, for what?/
Stupid school notes?/
You lend me to your friends/
They hurt me, and yet, you let them/
You lock me in a dark place most of the day/
It scares me/
Sometimes you chew on me/
Do you like to torture me?
Please just kill me
Break me in half with your hands/
Even yet, just push my body into a sharpener/
And peel my layers away/
In the end, I'm only a pencil to you/
And you, a monster to me//





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SpringRayyn said...
Jan. 1, 2011 at 1:32 am
This is really great! I like how you didn't say that it was about a pencil until the end. It's really expressive and descriptive. Again, why the slashes?
 
Kbuschan replied...
Jan. 1, 2011 at 5:20 pm
someone told me that i had to put those in order to have spacing but i know that is not true now lol
 
SpringRayyn replied...
Jan. 1, 2011 at 7:12 pm
Oh okay, well then it's fine:)
 
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