June 6, 2010
By Ashleybear SILVER, Kasass City, Missouri
Ashleybear SILVER, Kasass City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
I can do all things though crist who strenthens me!!!

My father is like the wind, strong and gentle,
he can make people cry and laugh,
no wonder why my dad is strong but comforting,
he is the wind!

My dad is like a strong fort; he is there when you need him most and he never leaves,
he surrounds you with love,
he holds you in you during the worst of storms,
so that is how my dad is like a strong fort!

my father is like a old book, he full of wisdom and guidance
he has the best answers to any problem,
he helps you understand any you question,
this is why my dad is like an old book!

my dad like fun toy, he is fun to play with and to sometimes share,
he has at time a playful side that lifts your sprit,
he dose make whatever your doing the best it can be,
that is the fun toy side of my dad!

So that is why I ask you dad, do you feel the same way about me,

The author's comments:
I wrote this pice to show my Dad how much i love and care about him.

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on Jul. 21 2010 at 8:39 am
writer62 SILVER, Springfield, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
" in order to be the best you have to play the best, in order to play the best you must practice the best, in order to practice the best you must practice the most. Practice is the key to being the best!"

Great Job!!!

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