Sweet Love Sour Tears

May 27, 2010
By LostAngel DIAMOND, Jersey, New Jersey
LostAngel DIAMOND, Jersey, New Jersey
65 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Just live your life, if people don't like the way you are doing it then they can get out of it" "if you can't stand me at my worst you dont deserve me at my best"


I wish I cared
I really do
I wish I felt something
When I left you

No emotions came to mind
As I looked into your tear stained eyes
I didn’t realize soon enough
That this was our demise

Before we left for our departure
I wanted one last embrace
Though I wanted to feel something when we touched
That was not the case

The love I felt was gone already
As I look at you one last time
I said our final good bye
Ending this nursery rhyme



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on Jul. 13 2010 at 9:12 pm
LostAngel DIAMOND, Jersey, New Jersey
65 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Just live your life, if people don't like the way you are doing it then they can get out of it" "if you can't stand me at my worst you dont deserve me at my best"

Thanks so much

on Jul. 13 2010 at 8:21 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
61 articles 36 photos 216 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

This is beautiful!




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