Invisible

June 10, 2010
By Della122195 SILVER, East Patchogue, New York
Della122195 SILVER, East Patchogue, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Crying doesn't indicate that you're weak; Since birth it has been a sign that you are alive."


You turn your head
And talk to the girl
Behind me

When I try to say something
You never
Respond or understand

Lost in my head
With who you are
But not even a face in the
Crowd to you

Loving hurts when I see you
Especially since I know it's
Pointless

I cry when I see you
Crying because I'm so weak...
So Invisible.



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on Oct. 14 2010 at 10:19 am
jamesacolson PLATINUM, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"God grant me the serenity to accept the things i cannot change, Courage to change the things i can, and Wisdom to know the difference. "

"Crying doesn't indicate that you're weak; Since birth it has been a sign that you are alive."

Very excellent, I like the raw emotion; it can be difficult for young people to express themselves- poetry is a great outlet. Keep it up; I'd like to read more! iwrite peotry too. i read your profile and it looks like we have alot in common. i would love for you to post more. Excellent work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

teamtitan said...
on Jul. 16 2010 at 8:50 am
Very nice, I like the raw emotion; it can be difficult for young people to express themselves- poetry is a great outlet. Keep it up; I'd like to read more!


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