The Lost

June 9, 2010
By _Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone


I'm drowning in my favorite songs
Maybe I'll forget the wasted days
I spent with him
The beat plays to my twisted thoughts as it tries to wash away the face consuming my thoughts.



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on Sep. 18 2010 at 3:09 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

what she said...i really like this captain. i love the metaphors-if that's what you call them. do your dance.

on Aug. 29 2010 at 11:04 am
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 281 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

woww. i luvvv this. itz short, yet so powerful. also, i can completely relate(: amazing jobb. definetly 5 starz

on Aug. 22 2010 at 1:05 pm
haventy0uheard PLATINUM, Kings Park, New York
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I really, really liked the emotion in this. Awesome job. Write on!<3

_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 6:45 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

thanks, yeah i didn't like that second line at first either but it just seemed like it had to go there

on Aug. 10 2010 at 6:04 pm
squidzinkpen SILVER, Buffalo, New York
9 articles 0 photos 193 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The Irish gave the Scots the bagpipes as a joke, but the Scots haven't seen the joke yet"- Irish Proverb

Me encanta much! The second last line looked a tad awkward, but the words were great! I totally get the meaning behind the poem!

_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Aug. 6 2010 at 4:27 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

thank you, and this poem isn't really about anyone. But my friends gave me the idea

on Aug. 6 2010 at 8:43 am
alaskatrailmutt, Jefferson, Maryland
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I liked it you very easly compacted a universal feeling. I tryed that lol. I failed. XD Oh well. Was this bout u or a friend?

_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 10:20 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

thank you so much :)

on Aug. 5 2010 at 7:11 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

wow this is fabulous!! so much packed in so little:) this is really really good!! awesome job. btw i really really like your art-your awesome:)

on Jul. 17 2010 at 10:08 am
xcrayolaxstormx SILVER, Coventry, Rhode Island
5 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't worry about it." -V.Z.

This was good. I don't think this is emo at all. Haha, those people don't know what they're talking about. But, I digress. It was short and sweet, and I liked how there wasn't a particular rhyme scheme, but it still flowed really well. Keep up the great work :)

_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Jul. 15 2010 at 8:01 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

thank you =)

on Jul. 15 2010 at 6:30 pm
Lost_In_LALA_Land BRONZE, Albuquerque, New Mexico
1 article 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
The akward moment when you look at someone and you realize what you could be, what you should be, and also that it will probaby never happen...</3

One just cause you like and write stuff like this does NOT mean you are EMO but same story with me... I always write very dark and stuff but hey I think its good :) And second that was REALLY good I liked it :)

_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Jul. 8 2010 at 3:50 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

one of my friends favorite poems but when a teacher read to half of the 7th grade people began screaming i was emo. hope ya'll are nicer. thanks for reading




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