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crush

i sit here in my seat
just thinking of you.
i wish i could know if you
liked me too.
i find myself
lost in a daze
dreaming about you and me.
together.
holding hands. hugging. kissing
i look at you
trying to figure out what youre thinking. you look over.
and smile your gorgous smile.
thats when i knew.
you were more than a crush.




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Lexie96 said...
Oct. 25, 2011 at 6:40 pm:
It's not a bad poem by any means, but I think that perhaps you could have done a bit more with it. Maybe throw in some words that are uncommon just to mix it up a bit? I did like it, though, and I can relate to it as well, so bravo. Could you please read my poem Sowing Poppies sometime? I would love to hear your opinion
 
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