Our Place

June 3, 2010
By Comfortably_Numb DIAMOND, Orchard Park, New York
Comfortably_Numb DIAMOND, Orchard Park, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Fairy tales do not teach children that dragons exist. Children already know that dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children that dragons can be killed.

We used to sit atop this bench,
my head nestled beneath your chin.
We would whisper our "I love you"s,
tell the stories of our day.
We used to walk along these trails,
fingers intwined.
I would lead you through the trees,
you would follow close behind.
Do you remember when I slipped
and you caught me as I fell?
You layed me down gently..
The rest is yours to tell.
We used to sit along the creek,
our toes softly kissing the water.
Staring into each other's eyes,
immersed in one another.
That is where our love started.
There is where it grew.
This is where it will remain forever.
This is me and you

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on Jul. 9 2010 at 9:34 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

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