Take Me..

July 6, 2010
By TheChemicalKidd SILVER, Lynn, Massachusetts
TheChemicalKidd SILVER, Lynn, Massachusetts
9 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I know this world is cold and deceiving, but i keep my head up like my nose is bleeding."

"Greater love has no one than this, that he lay his life for his brothers." John 15:13


you beat me,
mistreat me,
you leave me,
you lose me,
you love me,
you hate me,
you sit and abuse me!
im lost at words,
helpless in action,
your the love of my life,
cant you show passion?
your heart was once whole,
now i see that it's black,
i dont understand
what did i do for that smack?
why do you do this,
these actions of hate,
look me in the eyes,
do i look like it's fake?
these tears are real,
so is the fear,
you instilled this on me,
their finally here.
Take me...


The author's comments:
This is about Animal Rescue/ Animal Abuse. I am a strong felt animal lover, as you see =]

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on Jul. 12 2010 at 5:59 pm
TheChemicalKidd SILVER, Lynn, Massachusetts
9 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I know this world is cold and deceiving, but i keep my head up like my nose is bleeding."

"Greater love has no one than this, that he lay his life for his brothers." John 15:13

Thank youu

on Jul. 12 2010 at 5:07 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
30 articles 0 photos 414 comments

Favorite Quote:
i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

this is sooo good!

on Jul. 10 2010 at 7:42 pm
TheChemicalKidd SILVER, Lynn, Massachusetts
9 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I know this world is cold and deceiving, but i keep my head up like my nose is bleeding."

"Greater love has no one than this, that he lay his life for his brothers." John 15:13

thanks so much. i will do that 

on Jul. 10 2010 at 7:41 pm
TheChemicalKidd SILVER, Lynn, Massachusetts
9 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I know this world is cold and deceiving, but i keep my head up like my nose is bleeding."

"Greater love has no one than this, that he lay his life for his brothers." John 15:13

thank you =]

on Jul. 10 2010 at 6:30 pm
NightBloomingJazmyne SILVER, Cumming, Georgia
6 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are two kinds of writer: those that make you think, and those that make you wonder.
- Brian Aldiss

Poem was SOO good

on Jul. 10 2010 at 2:49 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

I LOVE THIS =] !! . I feel bad so bad for these innocent animals and your poem really showed how much someone could care about them . Very well written . Please check out my work :)

on Jul. 9 2010 at 3:48 pm
I am a major animal lover too. Iplan to work with them when I get older. Your poem was beautiful and the words flowed. It was really good. keep writing.

on Jul. 9 2010 at 1:39 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

The way your rhymes flow is so cool! I am terrible at rhyiming, it always seems really forced.

on Jul. 8 2010 at 11:34 pm
TheChemicalKidd SILVER, Lynn, Massachusetts
9 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I know this world is cold and deceiving, but i keep my head up like my nose is bleeding."

"Greater love has no one than this, that he lay his life for his brothers." John 15:13

Yeah, ide love to check out some of your work.

on Jul. 8 2010 at 11:33 pm
TheChemicalKidd SILVER, Lynn, Massachusetts
9 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I know this world is cold and deceiving, but i keep my head up like my nose is bleeding."

"Greater love has no one than this, that he lay his life for his brothers." John 15:13

Me too lol. =]

on Jul. 8 2010 at 8:46 pm
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
32 articles 2 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not about success; it's about significance.

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

Finally! Someone who understands how cruel it is to absue animals like that. This poem is just beautiful and I bet it'll reach out to many people. Animals don't deserve the mistreatment they are given. I don't know how anyone could possibly have the gall to hurt animals like there's no shame of it. Wonderful job on this poem, and could you please check out some of my work?

ChelzH SILVER said...
on Jul. 8 2010 at 7:53 pm
ChelzH SILVER, Ranson, West Virginia
6 articles 1 photo 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What is interesting about people is not their ability to do anything, but their perspective on everything and how the nuances of those perspectives correlate between people in similar and completely different situations." - K.H.

I  really like this, I love animals. :) I have two dogs and a guinea pig :)

I couldn't imagine hurting them, </3


on Jul. 8 2010 at 1:24 pm
TheChemicalKidd SILVER, Lynn, Massachusetts
9 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I know this world is cold and deceiving, but i keep my head up like my nose is bleeding."

"Greater love has no one than this, that he lay his life for his brothers." John 15:13

Glad to see im not the only one =)

on Jul. 8 2010 at 10:43 am
writingchick GOLD, Huntington, Indiana
11 articles 0 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith is taking another step without seeing the entire staircase."

I wrote a poem about animal abuse too! i think it's sooooo wrong. Everyday i arrange fundraiser for our local shelter and i volunteer there too. anyways good poem. I loved how you showed it from the animals perspective. Keep it up

on Jul. 8 2010 at 9:17 am
TheChemicalKidd SILVER, Lynn, Massachusetts
9 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I know this world is cold and deceiving, but i keep my head up like my nose is bleeding."

"Greater love has no one than this, that he lay his life for his brothers." John 15:13

thank you =] animalss <3 haha

4tun81 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 8 2010 at 9:04 am
4tun81 BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Memento Mori.

I like it :) I wrote a poem about animal abuse too. I love animals




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