Just How You Left Me

June 8, 2010
You left me with unexplainable pain

With no one to turn to

Questioning all I've ever known

You left me with absolutely nothing to gain

Grasping at shards of life

Holding onto every shred of hope

You left me crying in the rain

Wondering what I did wrong

And why you had to leave so soon

You left me with an ugly stain

From all the words that scarred me

And the careless demeanor you had about you

You left me, it was all in vain

And now, I'm a disaster, gripping at sanity
So, I'll fall apart without you, destroyed and all alone

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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 9:42 pm
I do love the disaster and tragedy behind this captain. and i am loving the last line. tres bon.
A_Dreamer said...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 4:18 pm

I love how you rhymed the first line of each stanza, it really makes the poem flow!

And this is a very relatable poem, for everyone who's struggling and feels like there's no one there for them. I could place myself in the poem. Good job! :)

MadAsAHatter... replied...
Jul. 17, 2010 at 6:34 pm
Thank you so much.
iluvuiluvunot replied...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 3:07 pm

I Loved It. Can Relate To That kindda Pain..Alot. I Always Feel Like This..So I Like To Hear I'm Not The Only One Struggling.


-But Well Written, Loved The Flow(:

I'm Jaiden Btw(: You Should Check Out Some Of My Stuff Sometime, I'm New &Nd Need alotta Help.

Healing_Angel This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 17, 2010 at 12:19 am
Really, really powerful Jess! I can relate! I know I said I was too busy, but I found some spare time. :)
BlackFire replied...
Dec. 19, 2011 at 11:27 am
This is great! I have felt the same way before. 
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