Just How You Left Me

June 8, 2010
By RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship


You left me with unexplainable pain

With no one to turn to

Questioning all I've ever known



You left me with absolutely nothing to gain

Grasping at shards of life

Holding onto every shred of hope



You left me crying in the rain

Wondering what I did wrong

And why you had to leave so soon



You left me with an ugly stain

From all the words that scarred me

And the careless demeanor you had about you



You left me, it was all in vain

And now, I'm a disaster, gripping at sanity
So, I'll fall apart without you, destroyed and all alone



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on Dec. 19 2011 at 11:27 am
Kparker27 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"In the end, it's still best to wait for the one we want rather than settle for what's available. It's still best to wait for the one you love rather than to settle for the one who's around. It's still best to wait for the right person, because life's too short to waste on the wrong one."

This is great! I have felt the same way before. 

on Jul. 20 2011 at 9:42 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I do love the disaster and tragedy behind this captain. and i am loving the last line. tres bon.

on Nov. 17 2010 at 12:19 am
Healing_Angel SILVER, Sydney, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Live for today, not for tomorrow

Really, really powerful Jess! I can relate! I know I said I was too busy, but I found some spare time. :)

on Jul. 28 2010 at 3:07 pm
iluvuiluvunot, Tacoma, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. It is our light, not our darkness that most frightens us."Ect....
-Marianne Williamson

I Loved It. Can Relate To That kindda Pain..Alot. I Always Feel Like This..So I Like To Hear I'm Not The Only One Struggling.

 

-But Well Written, Loved The Flow(:

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on Jul. 17 2010 at 6:34 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

Thank you so much.

on Jul. 15 2010 at 4:18 pm
Just.A.Dream SILVER, Lake Geneva, Wisconsin
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Part of the J7X team. :)

I love how you rhymed the first line of each stanza, it really makes the poem flow!

And this is a very relatable poem, for everyone who's struggling and feels like there's no one there for them. I could place myself in the poem. Good job! :)





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