The promise- and reality.

June 8, 2010
By DaylightDarkness SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
DaylightDarkness SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
9 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everyone's crazy. You know why? We all want to be normal. Well, we cant define normal, and, the people you can point at and say, well isn't he/she normal are rare. Doesnt that kind of defeat the pupose of normal? -My Friend


A promise.
Sealed with the turn of a key,
Bequeathing
All I am,
And am soon to be-
To the only one who truly sees
The damage and the danger,
In loving me.

So, In belonging,
To one who sees me as the monster
That I really am,
I finally understand-
The truth of being

This less than human

thing



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on Dec. 19 2011 at 11:33 am
Kparker27 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
30 articles 17 photos 101 comments

Favorite Quote:
"In the end, it's still best to wait for the one we want rather than settle for what's available. It's still best to wait for the one you love rather than to settle for the one who's around. It's still best to wait for the right person, because life's too short to waste on the wrong one."

this was amazing!!! I really like it 

on Aug. 26 2011 at 9:11 pm
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

very good!!! it was really great! i loved this and i love your other work as well!! :)(:

on Jul. 28 2011 at 7:26 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

i really like this too! i love the last bit ''this less than human thing'' its a good ending! :)

on Jul. 22 2011 at 10:48 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1648 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

This had great flow!  I only spotted one mistake: So, In belonging"  "In" shouldn't be capitalized.

Emily.L GOLD said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 1:16 pm
Emily.L GOLD, Gilbert, Arizona
10 articles 12 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes, we just have to be happy with what people can offer us. Even if it's not what we want, at least it's something. " -Sarah Dessen

This flowed really well, and is pretty amazing :)

on Jul. 20 2011 at 5:37 pm
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
31 articles 6 photos 578 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything's a triangle." ~ My mother

"Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it's the easiest way to be heard."

Interesting style. I really enjoyed this :)

Anagam BRONZE said...
on Jul. 19 2011 at 8:02 pm
Anagam BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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this has so much meaning! beautiful flow

Anagam BRONZE said...
on Jul. 19 2011 at 8:01 pm
Anagam BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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omg plz forgive me i put 4 instead of 5 aaghh. i'll rate it tomorow again :)

 


on Jul. 8 2010 at 6:14 pm
silver_moonlit10 PLATINUM, Ashburn, Virginia
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Many layers of thought with muliple meanings.




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