The promise- and reality.

June 8, 2010
A promise.
Sealed with the turn of a key,
All I am,
And am soon to be-
To the only one who truly sees
The damage and the danger,
In loving me.

So, In belonging,
To one who sees me as the monster
That I really am,
I finally understand-
The truth of being

This less than human


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writerfreak21231This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 26, 2011 at 9:11 pm
very good!!! it was really great! i loved this and i love your other work as well!! :)(:
Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 28, 2011 at 7:26 pm
i really like this too! i love the last bit ''this less than human thing'' its a good ending! :)
CarrieAnn13 said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 10:48 pm
This had great flow!  I only spotted one mistake: So, In belonging"  "In" shouldn't be capitalized.
Emily.L said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 1:16 pm
This flowed really well, and is pretty amazing :)
Garnet77 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 5:37 pm
Interesting style. I really enjoyed this :)
Anagam said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 8:02 pm
this has so much meaning! beautiful flow
silver_moonlit10 said...
Jul. 8, 2010 at 6:14 pm
Many layers of thought with muliple meanings.
Anagam replied...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 8:01 pm

omg plz forgive me i put 4 instead of 5 aaghh. i'll rate it tomorow again :)


BlackFire replied...
Dec. 19, 2011 at 11:33 am
this was amazing!!! I really like it 
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