Do You Remember?

June 8, 2010
By dancer13 GOLD, Troy, Michigan
dancer13 GOLD, Troy, Michigan
19 articles 0 photos 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I do not want people to be agreeable, as it saves me the trouble of liking them." ~Jane Austen


Hey you.
Yeah, you.
Do you remember me?
No?
That’s too bad.
I remember you.
Could I ever forget?
Don’t you recall –
That time we walked together, through the trees
Talking about everything, nothing, and anything in between –
No?
You don’t remember that you told me my hair was pretty?
You even ran your hand through my not-quite-straight, not-quite-curly locks.
No?
What about the time when you bought me ice cream?
You told me you were expanding my horizons
Introducing me to a new world of ice cr-
No?
I suppose you don’t remember that walk on the beach in the moonlight, either.
The one where we were messing around
And then I fell in the water.
You took me to your house for dry clothes.
Remember?
No?
Don’t be sorry. It’s all right.
I can’t expect you to remember everything, I guess.
After all, it was mostly my imaginings…
It really is a pity that you only exist in my writing (and dreams).
I think I’m in love with you anyway.


The author's comments:
This is probably one of the truest pieces I've ever written. :) Enjoy & comment!!! :)

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on Dec. 19 2011 at 11:39 am
Kparker27 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"In the end, it's still best to wait for the one we want rather than settle for what's available. It's still best to wait for the one you love rather than to settle for the one who's around. It's still best to wait for the right person, because life's too short to waste on the wrong one."

.....wow this is really good...I actually have been through this but in real life sadly. 

dancer13 GOLD said...
on Jan. 15 2011 at 7:53 pm
dancer13 GOLD, Troy, Michigan
19 articles 0 photos 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I do not want people to be agreeable, as it saves me the trouble of liking them." ~Jane Austen

aww I KNOW RIGHT.

lol.

thanks for commenting my darlingg <3 ;)


on Jan. 14 2011 at 1:50 pm
RainIngThunder BRONZE, Bloomfield, Michigan
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't take life too seriously, you'll never get out of it alive." Elbert Hubbard

this is really really true :)

dancer13 GOLD said...
on Aug. 14 2010 at 8:47 pm
dancer13 GOLD, Troy, Michigan
19 articles 0 photos 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I do not want people to be agreeable, as it saves me the trouble of liking them." ~Jane Austen

exactly, right?! thanks haha

and sure, i will. look for comments(:


_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Jul. 31 2010 at 7:25 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

amazing :) and i felt the same way at some point. You begin to think that the people you write about are so real then you realize they aren't real, sadly.

btw-can you check out some of my stuff?



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