Pink Cherry Blossom

June 8, 2010
By LostAngel DIAMOND, Jersey, New Jersey
LostAngel DIAMOND, Jersey, New Jersey
65 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Just live your life, if people don't like the way you are doing it then they can get out of it" "if you can't stand me at my worst you dont deserve me at my best"


The course of true love never did run smooth.
And according to you,
It has ended in a deep dark pit.
A pit that was filled,
By them,
With quicksand,
And sharp objects that cut you,
Every time you try to get out.

There is a tree outside the pit you say,
With 109378 branches.
You’ve tried 109377 times to get out,
And with each try,
Another branch breaks.

So try one last time,
Break that last branch,
Because then you will hear me say,
From the solid ground way up above your head,
“I can help you out of the quicksand,
You just gotta take my hand”.


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on May. 25 2011 at 1:29 pm
CaptainFabulous GOLD, Gray Summit, Missouri
17 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes I believe in as many as six impossible things before breakfast" - Lewis Carroll

great poem i love the part with the tree and the branches!

keep writing!

check out my work sometime >.<


on Jul. 16 2010 at 9:10 pm
DustyCheyanne<3 SILVER, Excelsior Springs, Missouri
7 articles 3 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its going to hurt, before it feels better. Trust me.. Its worth it.

fantastic. i liked it alot!!

GAP27 said...
on Jul. 10 2010 at 11:51 am

"Take my hand if you want to live,

There's nothing left that can save you.

This may be your only chance left, do not say no,

Please, with all my heart, do not let go.





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