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My trust is a feeble thing,
I have starved her so long,
You'd think she escaped
From Auschwitz,
Barely alive.



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Supernova7 said...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 3:11 pm:
I liked it:) especially the comparison you made. Could you please read some of my work? advice is welcome:)
 
yes_i_am This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 16, 2010 at 7:16 am :
thanks..i'll b glad to..
 
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_AMZ_ said...
Jul. 11, 2010 at 10:24 am:
I like the comparison you made. Without saying much, you tell a dark story where you blame yourself for the maltreatment of your trust, linking it to a terrible mark in history. This poem can be taken so many different ways, that is one thing I like about small poems, you can analyze the meaning from so many different perspectives. Great job
 
yes_i_am This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 11, 2010 at 10:32 am :

thanks..means a lot to me.

i expanded this poem a  little .it is published at teenink under the same name..thanks once again

 
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