On Trust

June 6, 2010
By yes_i_am SILVER, Faizabad, Other
yes_i_am SILVER, Faizabad, Other
6 articles 1 photo 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"not all those who wander are lost"


My trust is a feeble thing,
I have starved her so long,
You'd think she escaped
From Auschwitz,
Barely alive.


The author's comments:
A small poem ...

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on Jul. 16 2010 at 7:16 am
yes_i_am SILVER, Faizabad, Other
6 articles 1 photo 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"not all those who wander are lost"

thanks..i'll b glad to..

on Jul. 15 2010 at 3:11 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

I liked it:) especially the comparison you made. Could you please read some of my work? advice is welcome:)

on Jul. 11 2010 at 10:32 am
yes_i_am SILVER, Faizabad, Other
6 articles 1 photo 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"not all those who wander are lost"

thanks..means a lot to me.

i expanded this poem a  little .it is published at teenink under the same name..thanks once again


_AMZ_ BRONZE said...
on Jul. 11 2010 at 10:24 am
_AMZ_ BRONZE, Hemet, California
1 article 13 photos 269 comments

Favorite Quote:
"life is like a box of chocolates...you never know what you're going to get"

I like the comparison you made. Without saying much, you tell a dark story where you blame yourself for the maltreatment of your trust, linking it to a terrible mark in history. This poem can be taken so many different ways, that is one thing I like about small poems, you can analyze the meaning from so many different perspectives. Great job




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