May 22, 2010
By mpacheco15 BRONZE, Montclair, New Jersey
mpacheco15 BRONZE, Montclair, New Jersey
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Locked inside a shadowed room,
I keep my secrets hidden.
Until the day I set them free,
They’ll stay put as bidden.
People come, trying to break,
Their way into that place.
So they can scatter, collect, and free
The secrets of my face.

Sometimes one or two get free,
Never a really big one.
But the other day one was stolen
Now my future is done.
A thief came, one whom I trusted,
With life and limb and heart.
She went inside, with righteous pride,
And tore my trust apart.

To the world, or as I knew it,
She scattered it all around.
Gosh forbid she just took care of
What she previously found.
Now, too late, my hopes are useless,
Just as was my lock-ed doors.
Now all that is left of that room
Are tears of betrayal that streak the floor.

The room’s peace is shattered,
Laughter jostles what is stable,
This won’t be forgotten soon,
When my secret sits across the table.
Jordan says don’t even talk,
Cuz of what happened yesterday.
I spat words, belted out fists,
While rolling eyes with nothing to say.
But inside I slashed out with this:

I never wanted to love him!
He’s a C+, maybe B student,
I usually just like smart people,
But refuse him my heart just wouldn’t.
Either way, I’m pretty sure,
That I’ll be gone too soon.
Drawn towards battle, honor from country,
In very few afternoons.

A heart to be crushed, a secret let loose,
Havoc plagues my world.
I’m all alone, until this dies down,
Because my secret unfurled.
Now all anyone thinks or does,
Has to make me feel bad.
Because Gosh forbid they get a life,
Before I just go mad.

The author's comments:
I wrote this because I lived it. And yeah I do actually like him.

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on Oct. 2 2010 at 9:42 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

I love this. You painted SUCH a vivid picture in my mind, and I can definitely relate. Great job! Please check out some of my stuff, and never stop writing!

on Jul. 25 2010 at 10:39 pm
haventy0uheard PLATINUM, Kings Park, New York
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Amazing! You portray the affects of gossi and secret-holding perfectly =] I usually don't read longer poems but this one had me hooked. Write on! Check out and comment on my work please


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