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Its hurts,
You told me, and my heart felt heavier, my heart slowed a beat, my heart broke.

It feels like im slowly losing myself.

It feels like you never listened, like you never cared, like you never was my friend

The tears wont come, the tears wont fall
Theyre tired, they are sick of the same thing; tired of you bringing the pain back

It was always about you,
never was i the one that you asked if i had a good day

I cant anymore,
i cant pretend to be happy for you when im hurt
i cant stand the pain anymore, i cant stand the tears.

When will my happiness show, when will the tears become smiles, when will my depression stop?

Im done,
Im sorry
Im just done

Im done pretending

Im done giving you the attention you dont deserve

Im done showing my love to you when you never really saw it

Im done caring about you when you never was my friend

But it still hurts, the pain wont go away.

My heart is still heavy, slowing down


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And you dont even know....





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smart_blonde said...
Jul. 14, 2010 at 1:08 pm
Great work. Very emotional and honest.
 
Dominicangirl replied...
Nov. 14, 2010 at 2:27 pm
Thank you :)
 
Winchester_Girl said...
Jul. 14, 2010 at 12:42 am
its good that it shows that a girl can stand up for herself. i like this poem and i can relate to it
 
Dominicangirl replied...
Nov. 14, 2010 at 2:26 pm

Thanks :)

 

 
LostAngel said...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 12:07 pm
It's actually sposta be never were my friend. But other than that it was a great poem and it shows girls can stand up for themselves in realationships
 
Dominicangirl replied...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 12:16 pm
Thanksss :)
 
white_gurl_tuff_as_hell replied...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 7:50 am
this is really good i like it
 
Dominicangirl replied...
Nov. 14, 2010 at 2:31 pm
THank yhuuu :)
 
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