It hurts, but you dont even know, Im broken

June 5, 2010
By Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"


Its hurts,
You told me, and my heart felt heavier, my heart slowed a beat, my heart broke.

It feels like im slowly losing myself.

It feels like you never listened, like you never cared, like you never was my friend

The tears wont come, the tears wont fall
Theyre tired, they are sick of the same thing; tired of you bringing the pain back

It was always about you,
never was i the one that you asked if i had a good day

I cant anymore,
i cant pretend to be happy for you when im hurt
i cant stand the pain anymore, i cant stand the tears.

When will my happiness show, when will the tears become smiles, when will my depression stop?

Im done,
Im sorry
Im just done

Im done pretending

Im done giving you the attention you dont deserve

Im done showing my love to you when you never really saw it

Im done caring about you when you never was my friend

But it still hurts, the pain wont go away.

My heart is still heavy, slowing down


........................

And you dont even know....



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on Nov. 14 2010 at 2:31 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
44 articles 0 photos 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"

THank yhuuu :)

on Nov. 14 2010 at 2:27 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
44 articles 0 photos 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"

Thank you :)

on Nov. 14 2010 at 2:26 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
44 articles 0 photos 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"

Thanks :)

 


on Jul. 23 2010 at 7:50 am
Dragon_No_Love SILVER, Fridley, Minnesota
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this is really good i like it

on Jul. 14 2010 at 1:08 pm
smart_blonde GOLD, Reno, Nevada
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Great work. Very emotional and honest.

on Jul. 14 2010 at 12:42 am
Winchester_Girl BRONZE, Nine Mile Falls, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"we're living on borrowed time and if you don't put your heart out there on the line you're never really living at all"

its good that it shows that a girl can stand up for herself. i like this poem and i can relate to it

on Jul. 13 2010 at 12:16 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
44 articles 0 photos 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"

Thanksss :)

on Jul. 13 2010 at 12:07 pm
LostAngel DIAMOND, Jersey, New Jersey
65 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Just live your life, if people don't like the way you are doing it then they can get out of it" "if you can't stand me at my worst you dont deserve me at my best"

It's actually sposta be never were my friend. But other than that it was a great poem and it shows girls can stand up for themselves in realationships


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