You Are So Young.

May 22, 2010
By Kuyler GOLD, Coal Valley, Illinois
Kuyler GOLD, Coal Valley, Illinois
15 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference." - Robert Frost


I see you want to drink your life away,
But girl you're only seventeen.
Have you lost your sanity?
There is so much left to see.
Tell me what happened to those memories,
The ones were we fought our enemies.
We used to stand up so strong,
Come back home where you belong.
Please break that bottle now,
It kills me that you could wonder how
There is no future,
Nothing left.
You were so mature,
Had intellect.
Now you lie there on the floor,
Begging for life no more.
Take me hand,
I'll pull you up.
Life is not so bland,
Let me fix your makeup.
I did not come to rescue you,
Nor to start something new.
I just want to help you like you were,
Because for this i do not concur.
I can't see you like this,
Be with me,
I insist.


The author's comments:
About a girl who turns to alcohol for comfort.a

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Kuyler GOLD said...
on Jul. 11 2011 at 8:07 pm
Kuyler GOLD, Coal Valley, Illinois
15 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference." - Robert Frost

it happens way too often, i hate how some kids turn to alcohol to "fix" everything

Kuyler GOLD said...
on Jul. 11 2011 at 8:07 pm
Kuyler GOLD, Coal Valley, Illinois
15 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference." - Robert Frost

thank you friend

on Jul. 7 2011 at 5:27 pm
FlyleafFreak DIAMOND, Loveland, Colorado
51 articles 0 photos 203 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have faith in fools;self confidence my friends call it"~Edger Allan Poe
"In this world of infinite insanity, your friends are the best psychiatrists you will ever have."~Me

Again, very descriptive and colorful. Your pleading and obviously for the right things, the right sort of fixing in this poem. Nice job.

.Izzy. BRONZE said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 5:19 pm
.Izzy. BRONZE, Broadview Heights, Ohio
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Awh this is sad, but sadly common :/




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