Not So Sorry Anymore

May 23, 2010
By Valiant GOLD, Richardson, Texas
Valiant GOLD, Richardson, Texas
13 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You look like a bloated, cross-eyed squid with a beard.... well, at least you hair looks right."
Me to my friend Heidi


I'm sorry
That I wrote a song to tell you that I loved you.

I'm sorry
That I waited for you while you forgot about me and went out with someone else

I'm sorry
That I was never cute enough to be the one you loved

I'm sorry
That I was so nice and not a rude like the others

I'm sorry
That I was always the one you always talked to but never the one you dated

I'm sorry
That I've always held your hair back when you threw up and yet you always left with someone else

I'm sorry
That I was there to pick you up in the dead of the night when your date ditched you in the middle of nowhere

I'm sorry
If I wasn't there when it finally hurt too much being used as a doormat and then thrown aside for every new girl

I'm sorry
That I stopped answering my phone when you called

I'm sorry
That you didn't realize I was the one for you

But most of all

I'm sorry
That I told you I loved you and actually meant it.

I'm sorry
That I cared.

But I'm not sorry
that I found someone else to love



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Shahed GOLD said...
on Sep. 28 2010 at 3:39 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

I like the great minds thinking alike! thats a cool phrase lol .. anyways I will surely let you read it.. I hope i find it which is more than impossible.. I never thought of writing another version of it.. but i will :D promise! and let you read it

Valiant GOLD said...
on Sep. 28 2010 at 4:57 am
Valiant GOLD, Richardson, Texas
13 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You look like a bloated, cross-eyed squid with a beard.... well, at least you hair looks right."
Me to my friend Heidi

Great minds think alike. If you ever find it or write up another version of it, please let me know. I'm intrigued.

on Jul. 12 2010 at 10:54 am
smilebright BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
1 article 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your only in trouble if you get caught"- Aladdin

Thank you for comenting on my work

Valiant GOLD said...
on Jul. 11 2010 at 4:53 pm
Valiant GOLD, Richardson, Texas
13 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You look like a bloated, cross-eyed squid with a beard.... well, at least you hair looks right."
Me to my friend Heidi

I'd love to read some of your work. I'm flattered that you think so highly of me.

Shahed GOLD said...
on Jul. 10 2010 at 9:43 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

I've a poem so close to this, I've wrote it and gave it to someone and he lost it :(

I wish I can publish it and show you how similar they 're, good words I know how you feel..


on Jul. 10 2010 at 5:03 pm
smilebright BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
1 article 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your only in trouble if you get caught"- Aladdin

Wow. That i absolutly amazing. I'd be honored if you gave advice on my work

on Jul. 7 2010 at 11:34 pm
christin.bass SILVER, Eagle River, Alaska
8 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
you will never make it big if you dream small. youll never learn if your living in the past and youll never understand if you were to fast forward, just press play and live!

SO POWERFUL! I absolutely enjoyed reading your writing....just wow.

REMi93 GOLD said...
on Jul. 7 2010 at 5:41 pm
REMi93 GOLD, Boston, Massachusetts
10 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love Never Fails

LOVE! It's so deep and emotional et simply written. I love the message as well. Wonderful work! Keep it up... :)




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