July 5, 2010
By katherineg BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
katherineg BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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over the bight the moon
hung so thin

that it appeared as an egret, about to
swoop low into the crescent lip of the shore.

the water laps and our
feet slap hard sand, pounding out our

percussive movement.

the night sky grows darker around my peripheries
as my head grows dizzy;

yet there is no lunar swoop

and my egret moon remains
suspended in this salt air.

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on Jul. 11 2010 at 12:05 am
Dawn.Angelicca PLATINUM, Edison, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Nunc aut numquam.

This was very beautiful!!!

on Jul. 7 2010 at 4:14 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

This is very well written. The image that this formed in my mind was beautiful. Keep writing!

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on Jul. 7 2010 at 2:29 pm
Lexi-pex GOLD, Billingham, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams."
- Eleanor Roosevelt

pretty poem. really pretty : ) well done.


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