You Told Me You Loved Me

July 2, 2010
By bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
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sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant


You told me you loved me,
Well that was a lie.
You thought I was laughing,
But on the inside I cry.

You told me you loved me,
But nobody really knew
The pain and discomfort
That you put me through.

You told me you loved me
But I couldn't see,
How much you ended up
Hurting me.

You told me you loved me,
But I couldn't tell
That you made my life
A living hell.

You told me you loved me,
You told me you cared
But when in my time of need
You were not there.



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on Aug. 22 2011 at 8:53 pm
krazykelsey BRONZE, Janesville, Wisconsin
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Love is a work in progress for the rest of you life

wow that was really gud i loved it... yu get five stars!!!!

on Jul. 17 2011 at 1:31 am
lee_la097 SILVER, Wood Dale, Illinois
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Poems don\'t always rhyme, but show the feelings you had, at the time(: i wrote it myself, haha(:

I loved it(: you're a great writer!

on Jul. 11 2010 at 1:46 pm
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
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sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant

thank you so much

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on Jul. 9 2010 at 7:35 pm
I love it 5 stars




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