How He Feels.

May 30, 2010
By TryingToB BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
TryingToB BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
\"He pokes your ribs and says your thin beyond repair. You poke yourself in the ribs-all you feel is fat.\"

I just lost him.
The razor blades are right there.
Why don’t I do it?
Why don’t I make the pain go away
and fall into a deep never ending sleep?
Because I promised him
and I don’t want to hurt him
anymore than I already have.
It was my fault,
my mistake.
Now I'm taking responsibility for it all.
I have to pick up the pieces…
I have to continue
even if it hurts.
I guess…
now I know how he feels.

The author's comments:
What do you do...when your love is lost?

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on Aug. 10 2011 at 6:59 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
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Favorite Quote:
life had i loved the more
had it but passed away
as quietly as the day
ebbs from the darkening star.

-emanuel litvinoff

nnnggwwww keeping a promise to someone whos gone. so sweet

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