It Goes On

May 25, 2010
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The sun rises to shine the light on our pure innocent love
The rain falls to wash away our melancholy
The birds sing to show the rhyme of our single beating heart
Trees grow to show the growing of our long lasting love and that it goes on...

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V-ballChick said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 10:50 pm
Wow that like lingers in your mind even after you've finished reading it!
Rulesofmyown replied...
Aug. 5, 2010 at 5:51 am
thankssss!! glad you like it!!:)
Bigbirdocho said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 9:15 am
nicely written
Rulesofmyown replied...
Aug. 8, 2010 at 8:36 am
thank youu!:)
jessica.cherish.conner said...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 6:17 pm
This is so short yet you continue to think about it, and there for it remains long. Its sweet and close to perfect. Great job.
Rulesofmyown replied...
Jul. 27, 2010 at 8:15 am
thank youuu sooo much, appreciate the comment...:)
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 11, 2010 at 2:19 pm
wow this is really powerful!!! awesome job this is really good!! i just really love how you wrote this-beautiful poem:) please check out some of my work when you get the chance:)
Rulesofmyown replied...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 7:43 am
thank youu so much:) i reallyy appreciate ur opinion, and ofcourse i would check out ur work:)
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