in your moon

June 8, 2010
By birdielux BRONZE, Bartlett, Illinois
birdielux BRONZE, Bartlett, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"The world is mud-luscious and puddle-wonderful."


i am in your moon
and in your muons
showering you in cosmic rays so outrageous
that even sunspots get real jealous
but they don't know the half of it,
don't even know the freckle dents in your

morning star
don't even know the new scientist in your

mad silentist
and now i'm only rambling,
but even that impresses you
and i'm sending you apple telegraphs
waiting for message jewels
prying my fingernails from your love corkboard
with JUSTENOUGH strength to

aggravate

gravity
while still staying on
good speaking terms
& it's funny how you always want to

say yes!

say yes!
to my fingerprint heartbeat,
chandeliers spillling,
turtle naps &

soup overbrimming—
it's like maybe you know me too well
and maybe i know you enough to know better
but we all know
how good i am
at playing dumb.


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on Jul. 6 2010 at 11:03 pm
birdielux BRONZE, Bartlett, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"The world is mud-luscious and puddle-wonderful."

Thank you so much for both your comments! I haven't read Abundance yet :)

Eilatan GOLD said...
on Jul. 6 2010 at 6:55 pm
Eilatan GOLD, Old Greenwich, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"Nobody is normal. Everybody in the world is a weirdo freak. Except you, which makes you a weirdo freak."

I love both of your poems!

You have a really unique voice- possibly to match your cool profile- (I love e.e. cummings and Looking For Alaska as well. John Green also wrote An Abundance of Kathrines, which is EVEN BETTER than L.F.A.)

keep writing your poems, you have real talent. good work.



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