little sis

June 8, 2010
By Eli15 GOLD, Melboune, Other
Eli15 GOLD, Melboune, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Hope is believing in spite of evidence then watching the evidence change


Your love is the emotion, Ive wanted to see.
When your terrified or mad, I will always be me.
As a kid, You were there for my spelling bees.
So now i will be there for whenever you need,

I hate our arguing, I just want you to know
I care for you a lot, So please dont go


The author's comments:
I tried to create something for my sister who is about to turn 14 and she hates my poetry so i tried to make something that would include my feelings for her so she would want to read it.

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on Jul. 7 2010 at 12:17 am
TheSummoningFreak PLATINUM, Lugoff, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
if you can never let yourself fall you'll never know what it's like to love

I really like this, and it's same with me but it's with my older sister. she doesn't like my poetry and I've been trying to write a poem for her for her B-Day, and I'm going crazy cuz I can't write one thing I have writers block. But this poem is Great, she will love it.

on Jul. 6 2010 at 11:53 am
thezebrasgray PLATINUM, Taylorsville, Utah
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i really like it (except i'd take the s off of bee(s) is spelling bees) but free verse is simply anything.  it can rhyme if you want it to, but it doesn't have to.  free verse has no rules, thats why i like it so much

Eli15 GOLD said...
on Jul. 6 2010 at 5:49 am
Eli15 GOLD, Melboune, Other
19 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hope is believing in spite of evidence then watching the evidence change

Can someone please tell me what the difference is between free verse and rhyming?? I think i might be struggling to come up with a free verse poem if i dont know what it means.

Thanks girls for commenting. I really appreciate it. you are the first ones to comment on anything. And noone has bothered to read my story and give me some feed back on it. Im not bitter i just need some feedback. Thanx heaps


on Jul. 6 2010 at 12:46 am
CourtneyLou BRONZE, SLIDELL, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
Some would rather be miserable then risk being happy ~Robert Anthony

This relates alot to me and my sisters I like it :)

on Jul. 5 2010 at 11:07 pm
love,Haley BRONZE, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
Who owns my heart? Is it love or is it art?
--Miley Cyrus, "Who Owns My Heart"

I think the idea is nice but when you don't rhyme in a free-verse, it can be better... Just a suggestion(:


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