Flying to His Ice Princess

June 5, 2010
By alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."


There he sat 'neath the cherry tree,
Drowning in ice cold misery.
His heart was pumping out pain and ache,
While time was beginning to fade.

Eyes heavy with sorrow,
Not wanting to see the morrow.
A mist of dreams poured over him,
Making him numb from limb to limb.

His ice princess is surrounded,
Gasping for breath, her heart pounded.
Chasing her was an ice cold death,
And, turning blue, she gave her last breath.

Dolores; her lips once a ruby red,
Now lay pale, cold, and dead.
Up above flies a dove,
As he leaves to see his true love.


The author's comments:
I wrote a poem for spanish and this is basically what it says in english. This poor man died of heart ache and, in case you didn't understand it, is going to reunite with his true love, Dolores, in heaven. Dolores (which actually means pain) died from drowning in a pond because the ice broke. I kind of got the idea from 'Handle With Care' by Jodi picoult. Hope you kinda sorta liked the poem.

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on Oct. 1 2010 at 4:17 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

Thanks!!! :D Yeah I wrote it in spanish last year and I had to explain it to Senor Vigil and he liked it but it was "too profound" so I had to write a cheesy poem instead bcuz he wanted sumthing simple grrr! lol

on Sep. 30 2010 at 8:50 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

I didn't kinda sorta like the poem - I loved it! It paints such a sad but beautiful story in your head... I remember doing these poems in Spanish!! Lol :)


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