Falling

June 1, 2010
By Doomcarrot GOLD, Angola, Indiana
Doomcarrot GOLD, Angola, Indiana
17 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is no light but the light in your eyes/ There is no light, no light in these skies/ There is no sound but of how I cry/ There is no sound, no sound in this night..."


Arriving late to death
Because I’m always tardy
Feeling less with a broken heart
A life is a song, barely even started
Running away from your life
Falling into your unmarked tomb

Falling slowly, freezing up, slower than breath
Running slower than possible
When you try to run from death

Never forgetting a single line
Throwing in too many lies
Only the dull ones hide
Cuz we always have a time
Knowing too much is heartache
Loving too much leads to heartbreak

Burning ice to feed the evil
Scratching dirt to feel what’s real
Everyone who thinks they’re smart
Is the biggest fool until it starts

Falling is a pastime
When life will only pass you by
You’re so short when you feel tall
Fading out, a voice so small
Better get running
If you’d like to keep breathing
Cuz falling is a pastime
When the time keeps
Passing you by



Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 2 comments.


on Jul. 18 2010 at 8:49 pm
Doomcarrot GOLD, Angola, Indiana
17 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is no light but the light in your eyes/ There is no light, no light in these skies/ There is no sound but of how I cry/ There is no sound, no sound in this night..."

Thanks so much for the views and the comment. :) I'm going to read your work at the moment. Tank you very much. I'm glad you like it.

on Jul. 12 2010 at 9:16 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

i love this!! great job and it was well written. i recently joined the site and most of my work hasn't yet been accepted. but two of my pieces have, and id love if you viewed them and told me what you think:)




MacMillan Books

Aspiring Writer? Take Our Online Course!