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Revealing Time

June 4, 2010
By joselyn BRONZE, Seattle, Washington
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I see the world shatter,
I see it all,
I can't move, I'm frozen
I'm frozen in time
No one is here to listen
Everyone just leaves me
in a worthless clump
Nobody cares
no one
All alone in the world
I feel rime begin to re-start
I wait, I'm breathless
when I take in that gulp of fresh air all I feel is pain in my lungs
With the urge to cry.
But I don't,
I hold in the tears like always
hoping everything is just
a nightmare
I then awake into an endless sleep
never to return,
leaving guilt and shock,
on the faces, who said
"no you can't"

© Mark S., Kannapolis, NC

The author's comments:
It's not like I'm depressed or anything, I think everyone feel like this once in a while and this is how i felt on a day where i felt there was no one to listen and i did things on my own when others said i couldn't.
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