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I could write down
all the wonderful things about you,
but then I would need
a piece of paper three miles long.
So I hope this will do:
I love you just the way you are
keep being you.



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SilverSnowflakes said...
Sept. 8, 2010 at 1:36 pm:
I like it :)
 
Jandee replied...
Sept. 8, 2010 at 8:07 pm :
Thank you so very much. ♥
 
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OldSpeckledHen said...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 3:50 pm:

I like it. Straight forward, no gushy nonsense, and despite that, it conveys the emotion well.

 

Well done.

 
Jandee replied...
Sept. 8, 2010 at 8:08 pm :
Thank you very much, kind sir.
 
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A.Dreamer said...
Aug. 27, 2010 at 9:22 pm:
I like this, short and sweet. :) It's very simple, but it has a whole lot of meaning. As short as this is, it actually works out to be a lovely poem. Good job!
 
Jandee replied...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 8:40 am :
Oh yay! I am thrilled you like this! I think you should look up the poem it was partially inspired by "Vade Mecum" by Billy Collin's. It's a lovely, short poem.
 
thewritician replied...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 2:47 pm :
Jandee I think this is amazingly beautiful. It doesn't have to rhyme or have a special meaning it just makes sense and I love it. Great job (5/5)
 
Jandee replied...
Sept. 8, 2010 at 8:08 pm :
Thank you!
 
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XCLover said...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 9:03 pm:
This is definitely my favorite of yours!!! It's exactly how I feel about my boyfriend. And I can relate to finding inspiration at weird times haha, my last inspiration came in the middle of Shrek 4.
 
Jandee replied...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 12:52 pm :
Lol. I actually wrote [vandalized] this on a desk at school because I was hoping someone would see it and it would make them smile.
 
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ItWasAMurderButNotACrime This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 6:25 pm:
This was lovely. Short, sweet, and to the point.  Nice rhythm,and your rhymes worked well together.  That was really sweet:D
 
Jandee replied...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 6:57 pm :
Thank you. I'm glad you like it. ♥
 
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GangstaEyesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 6:16 pm:
Amazing. So short and sweet and relatable. Love it! <3
 
Jandee replied...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 6:54 pm :
Thank you very much for your lovely comment. ♥
 
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mandapanda9736 said...
Aug. 16, 2010 at 12:50 pm:
oh i love this! very short and sweet, perfect! keep it up!
 
Jandee replied...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 2:11 pm :
Thank you very, very much.
 
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Mimi8 said...
Aug. 16, 2010 at 12:02 pm:
This is a really sweet poem. I love it! Short and to the point. And I know what you are talking about, I had the inspiration for my latest poem while playing Hedghog Launch... I know, a little weird, but I was bored.
 
Jandee replied...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 2:10 pm :
Lol. Hedgehog Launch?
 
Mimi8 replied...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 3:16 pm :
Yes... I know... Hedgehog Launch. :P
 
Jandee replied...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 6:54 pm :
I don't know what to think about that... xD
 
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