Eerie's Night

June 3, 2010
Shadow's downcast on Eerie's night,
the stars smiling frightfully upon it-
Crisp, the air she breathes smells of warmth,
softly embracing her luminescent skin-
Crack! The light rolls through her eyes,
the thunder her melody of choice-
so she sings,
circling the horizon she takes
the attention of all living-
leaving them to wonder in the midst of mystery
with gaping eyes and pounding hearts-
Sleep is for no man
on Eerie's night.

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xlivelaughlove This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 17, 2010 at 12:39 pm

Wow. I really can't say much else besides that. This is definitely one of the better poems that I've read lately. It was hidden and beautiful. I congratulate you for pulling off such a balance between the mysterious and the revealed. [: Please do write more; I will try to stay posted!

Enjoy five, much-earned stars from moi

AprilEverAfter said...
Aug. 14, 2010 at 11:37 am
WOW! This is really good and I agree with Myworld.
myworld10 said...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 10:03 pm
Btw, please write more poems!! I'll be watchin out..
myworld10 said...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 10:03 pm
I can't believe no one has posted on this article yet, but at least I will....I absolutely loooove this! Like you, I like poems and/or stories that leaves a sense of mystery behind, and something that keeps your mind wondering, trying to unearth  the real meaning of it.
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