My poem dawg

June 4, 2010
By Redheadkid BRONZE, Menifee, California
Redheadkid BRONZE, Menifee, California
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Portrait poem

I am funny & red haired

I wonder about the past

I hear music

I see dead people

I want to have a good carrier

I am funny & red haired

I pretend to listen
I feel happy
I touch video games
I worry about my family

I cry over death
I am funny & red haired

I understand math
I say live life to the fullest
I dream about peace
I try to listen to my mom
I hope to have a nice life
I am funny & red haired

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Eilatan GOLD said...
on Jul. 4 2010 at 11:32 am
Eilatan GOLD, Old Greenwich, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"Nobody is normal. Everybody in the world is a weirdo freak. Except you, which makes you a weirdo freak."

This is one of those 'I am' poems, isn't it.

on Jul. 2 2010 at 3:29 pm
LadyMoon DIAMOND, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
I'm so weird I'm normal
-Khalil, a friend

Nice! I like how you keep the same line about being funny and redhaired over and over agian. It kind of ties the whole thing together....Super Awesome!!

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