My poem dawg

June 4, 2010
Portrait poem

I am funny & red haired

I wonder about the past

I hear music

I see dead people

I want to have a good carrier

I am funny & red haired

I pretend to listen
I feel happy
I touch video games
I worry about my family

I cry over death
I am funny & red haired

I understand math
I say live life to the fullest
I dream about peace
I try to listen to my mom
I hope to have a nice life
I am funny & red haired

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Eilatan This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 4, 2010 at 11:32 am
This is one of those 'I am' poems, isn't it.
LadyMoon said...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 3:29 pm
Nice! I like how you keep the same line about being funny and redhaired over and over agian. It kind of ties the whole thing together....Super Awesome!!
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